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This isn't going to be a subliminal message
Saying that I want us again.
But simply a run-through on my feelings.

I miss the way we used to be.
When we didn't fight.
When we were happy because we had eachother.
When you were my best friend.

We used to laugh.
A lot.

And we would take naps together
Slowly falling into a pattern of each others breathe
While watching something funny on TV.

We used to smile.
And make fun of each other playfully
On and off
On again
Off again
It never really stopped.

I used to play with your ear when you slept
And watch you make faces
While twitching
In your sleep.

Our feelings for each other were infinite.
People knew it too.
Everyone knew we were in love.
No one ever questioned it.
They all knew it was real.
And just like this poem,
It had no real ending.
©2004-2009 ~taintedserenity
:icontaintedserenity:

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this isnt one of my favorites. it has no ending. and its just jumbled together in a big BLAH. mhmm.

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:iconrandomdude:
really...like...wow...and amazing ending, very creative...original work...favorite all the way

--
Johnny
:iconthedissolvingisland:
I agree with John full heartedly, great ending.
:iconnostalgicstar:
i like this... its happy.. in a nostalgic way
:iconladyindistress:
oh, i do really really like this.

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"doesn't everything die at last, and too soon?
tell me, what is it you plan to do
with your one wild and precious life?"
:iconbrown-eyed-girl:
wow, reminds me of jeff and i.

this is great alyssa.

the ending is great!

--

and as the summer's ending,
the cool air will put your hard heart away.
you were so condescending...
and this is all that's left:

scraping paper to document.
i've packed a change of clothes and it's time to move on.
-d e a t h CAB
:iconpinkgasoline:
Your so great Alyssa....the poems good...I like the little picture thingy mer bob...i like where it says 'Love is a headache'....it's true..

--
You can't deny that I'll be the one mistake you carry forever.
:iconshe-left-with-tears:
:wow: I will have to agree with everyone on this one! :D really good babe!

--
:*:Bring Me A Cookie And I'll Give You A Kiss:*:

Time doesn't change,
love never dies,
and the pain will always be there...

Remember when... yeah, well I do.
:iconangelbebe707:
oh my flippin' gawd!

:+fav:

it remindes me so much of Henry and I when our relationship was ending. well, you know, not ending but rather dying, and trying to hold onto the memories to keep it fresh.

you're a genius :heart:

--
RIP Henry Droneburg 11/25/88 - 3/6/07
Never forgotten

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